hesitate to write.I have a lot of things to write here sometimes but I
forget them when I'm in front of my laptop.
I have spent 1 week already without writing a diary.December is kind
of busy so it's O.K. I'm talking to myself.
By the way I took TOEIC test. The total score is 555.Listening is
260.Reading is 295.Actually I disappointed myself because the score is less
than I expected.....I am going to study English harder that's why.
Thanks for reading.
: )
2 comments:
Hi Masato!
Your English is pretty good. You write well, but you seem to miss the occasional word. I'll help you out:
>I'd like to write a diary every day but the day goes by when I hesitate to write.
You should put an adverb somewhere "but the day goes by", for example: "but occasionally the day goes by" or "but often the day goes by".
>Actually I disappointed because the score is less than I expected.....I am going to study English harder that's why.
You should say "Actually I *am* disappointed" because you are using disappointed as an adjective there and not a verb. To use it as a verb you would say: "I disappointed myself because the score was less".
Good work!
>almostaphd
Hi almostaphd!
Thank you for telling!It will be my assets.
>I'd like to write a diary every day but the day goes by when I hesitate to write.
You mean I should put a frequency word.I should have put "often" in this sentence. :)
>I disappointed
I was supposed to write "I disappointed myself" but I forgot to write it because I am not used to writing English.....Also I didn't realize I could write "I was disappointed". So I believe I can write that kind of way since you told me!Thanks!
Actually I was of two minds whether I should use "less" or "fewer".
I heard "less" was sometimes used for both countable words and uncountable words so I used "less",haha.
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