By the way he is my kitten who is taken in my picture. the kitten in the picture is mine.Actually he is not a little he is actually not so young and so cute. not so cute and so young anymore,and I think his eyes are rounder than they are too round.
Because his eyes are round even though he is a cat...
However all of my family love him.
However all of my family members love him.
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Now I am just trying sending email to put a diary by cell phone.If it works,I can write diary all of the time.
(We usually don't put "now" at the beginning of a sentence; not that it's completely wrong, the sentence just sounds smoother if you put the now @ the end; but if you want to be informal, it's best to say...
"Right now I am trying to post a diary entry (on my blog) with my cellphone."
If it works,I can write diary all of the time.
(This is alright, but for me, I'd say... If this works, I can write diary entries all the time)
By the way he is my kitten who is taken in my picture.
(By the way, the kitten in the picture is mine).
Actually he is not a little and so cute.
(He's actually not so young anymore but he's still so very cute)
Because his eyes are round even though he is a cat...
However all of my family love him.
(However is used the the idea contrast the one before it, but since it is logical for your family to love him since he's so cute, you can just simply use "and" to conjugate the sentences").
Even though he's a cat, his eyes are exceptionally round and [my family/all of my family members] love him.
:)
>>catypical
Thank you for correcting!!
I cannot understand the feeling that "We usually don't put "now" at the beginning of a sentence; not that it's completely wrong, the sentence just sounds smoother if you put the now @ the end".
if I read a lot of English sentences,I may not understand,hahaha.
I'll get step by step.
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