I'd like to tell my friends about this diary because I can communicate with them
through this blog.
I can tell them about myself
This is a private diary which is written by Masato. My purpose is to practice to write English and to use it.I'd like to improve my English. Please tell me when you notice my mistake.
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It's the second day but I've almost forgotten to write a diary (already)....
(or, It's only the second day and I've almost forgotten to write a diary already)
I'd like to tell my friends (about) this diary because I can communicate (with) them through this blog.
I can tell them about myself.
I could wrote this diary.
(I can tell them about myself if I write in this diary).
I hope I can continue and remember this diary....
(I hope I can remember and continue this diary; or, I hope I can remember and continue [to write in] this diary)
It seems "smoother" or a bit more logical if you put remember before continue ~ it's more like you're saying that "if you do remember to continue".
hehe ~
please write more ~
:)
>>catypical
Thank you for correcting!!
I have to pay attention to put "in","about" and "with".I am apt not to put the preposition.
I can study more because you taught me!!Thank you! ;)
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